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The Darkest Wood | Poem
« on: August 22, 2016, 09:30:15 AM »
I randomly decided to make a poem, lol. I dont know if its any good, but..

Are you coming to the darkest wood,
Where men they say, sunk in mud,
Their bones devoured by the earths power,
And they suffocated in the floor.

Are you coming to the darkest wood,
Where men and women, shed their blood,
To this day we shan't go back,
To the forest of death, where dead body's stack.

Are you coming to the darkest wood,
Where gunshots ring reminding us,
That only the darkness has no light,
Not even from the moon, at midnight.

We must leave the darkest wood,
If we have any hope of survival,
Pray to god, that we read all his story's, from his mighty bible,
Perhaps he may now show us mercy,
If the darkest wood, is not bloodthirsty.

We stumbled over sticks and stones,
We stumbled over rotting bones,
Searching and searching for wanted light,
We saw the pond, a wonderful sight,
But the creature within, began to bite.
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Re: The Darkest Wood | Poem
« Reply #1 on: August 22, 2016, 10:23:50 AM »
Thinking of writing a couple other poems, maybe some stories too, so criticism would be really nice! :D
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