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[Jack Of Shades]

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[Jack Of Shades]

Please, anyone who judges my work and reads it, I welcome opinions and criticism.
I need opinions on whether I should continue the story here. Otherwise, it will end up like other works and I will privately work on it through MS Word.

[Jack Of Shades]

OP updated, few more lines of story to add.

[Jack Of Shades]

OP updated. About 13 paragraphs of story written. More to come soon.

-Jack

P.S. If anyone wants to know my music I listen to for inspiration, here is a playlist I use to help me write this story. I use different music for different stories.
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[PWRBTTN]

You REALLY capture the humanity in your writing. The characters aren't just playing roles on a stage. They feel alive. I can't wait for more, but no rush. I don't want the story ruined.

[Jack Of Shades]

You REALLY capture the humanity in your writing. The characters aren't just playing roles on a stage. They feel alive. I can't wait for more, but no rush. I don't want the story ruined.

I'm glad you enjoy it, PWR. I love writing for anyone who will read it. I must admit, during this portion I was drinking the same thing Jason was. But I tend to find that a few drinks, some music, and the right atmosphere set me off for writing A LOT. I'm just brainstorming ideas real quick and I will get back to doing the next part of the story. Also, Buddy Guy's song 'Feels Like Rain' helped during this. Among other great songs.