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Title: New video
Post by: tatter12 on August 30, 2016, 02:10:25 PM
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=EvnLEaLxdVI
Hope you guys like it
Title: Re: New video
Post by: Fuertey on August 30, 2016, 02:38:26 PM
Just some suggestions:

Put more details in the topic title than just "New video"

Try and get your camera facing straight at the tv both horizontally & vertically and better focused. As you're trying to show people how to make a script yet we can't actually see what it is you're doing.

Your commentary and explanation was ok, but some people find it easier to read and see what's being done.
Title: Re: New video
Post by: TheDestinedCrab on August 30, 2016, 03:03:19 PM
Im gonna have to agree with Fuertey. Commentary is ok, i couldnt read your script lines that you were writing, and your tv looked slanted :P

But lets stop with the negatives because everyone loves a positive!

Nice script, explained fairly decently. Would reccomend making more videos but with the changes above.

Title: Re: New video
Post by: tatter12 on August 30, 2016, 03:49:23 PM
Just some suggestions:

Put more details in the topic title than just "New video"

Try and get your camera facing straight at the tv both horizontally & vertically and better focused. As you're trying to show people how to make a script yet we can't actually see what it is you're doing.

Your commentary and explanation was ok, but some people find it easier to read and see what's being done.
Thank you for the feed back