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General => Writers Corner => Topic started by: Panther on February 02, 2016, 04:23:13 PM

Title: A knighty adventure
Post by: Panther on February 02, 2016, 04:23:13 PM
Edit: Please delete this.
Title: Re: A knighty adventure
Post by: Gary on February 03, 2016, 01:44:47 PM
uhhhhh
Title: Re: A knighty adventure
Post by: MadDog95 on February 03, 2016, 01:52:09 PM
I demand a movie adaptation of this right now!
Title: Re: A knighty adventure
Post by: Dryym on February 03, 2016, 01:59:03 PM
Just a suggestion, Try a bit of pacing in your storytelling. In most books I read, The story doesn't escalate that quick in the first chapter.

You may also want to work a bit on your ability to convey your "plot" in a way that keeps the reader interested.

If you're writing a love story, You don't want to skip over the parts that give substance to it, As that is rather unrealistic, And uninteresting.
Title: Re: A knighty adventure
Post by: Panther on February 03, 2016, 03:27:34 PM


EDIT: I had no thought process back then.