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« on: August 18, 2016, 09:39:30 PM »
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Re: A nσιя
« Reply #1 on: August 22, 2016, 07:14:41 PM »
Please, anyone who judges my work and reads it, I welcome opinions and criticism. :)
I need opinions on whether I should continue the story here. Otherwise, it will end up like other works and I will privately work on it through MS Word.


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Re: A nσιя
« Reply #2 on: August 22, 2016, 10:33:48 PM »
OP updated, few more lines of story to add.

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Re: A nσιя
« Reply #3 on: August 27, 2016, 07:23:50 PM »
OP updated. About 13 paragraphs of story written. More to come soon.

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Re: A nσιя
« Reply #4 on: August 27, 2016, 07:29:51 PM »
You REALLY capture the humanity in your writing. The characters aren't just playing roles on a stage. They feel alive. I can't wait for more, but no rush. I don't want the story ruined.
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Re: A nσιя
« Reply #5 on: August 27, 2016, 07:43:45 PM »
You REALLY capture the humanity in your writing. The characters aren't just playing roles on a stage. They feel alive. I can't wait for more, but no rush. I don't want the story ruined.
I'm glad you enjoy it, PWR. I love writing for anyone who will read it. I must admit, during this portion I was drinking the same thing Jason was. But I tend to find that a few drinks, some music, and the right atmosphere set me off for writing A LOT. I'm just brainstorming ideas real quick and I will get back to doing the next part of the story. Also, Buddy Guy's song 'Feels Like Rain' helped during this. Among other great songs.