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Animated sign video
« on: December 07, 2016, 07:33:21 PM »
Hello miners!

Today I recorded a video of an animated sign that I made on my city map that I am currently working on. This video, admittedly, is not the best video, because some of the text is off the screen because I was recording with my phone and didn't go back far enough, but the only option that I have right now for recording is my phone and everybody has to start somewhere, so please don't be too harsh. Anyway here is the video if you'd like to take a look, I will most likely be uploading more TM videos in the future...

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Re: Animated sign video
« Reply #1 on: December 08, 2016, 03:03:02 AM »
I'm gonna give you some criticism :

Good parts :

1) You scripted something unique to few maps

2) You made me intruiged as to what was in the map as it seems member mased.

Bad parts :

1) One word per slide is actually really annoying to read

2) You could go with 2 colours on your 'sign' background such as the red background and a black border. That would look 100 X more advanced.

3) The title of sign is a bit misleading, I expected a crappy video of you ysing set text on a sign, so a title such as this would be better fitting : Total Miner : Forge Animations With Creeps

That's not meant to sound mean, just honest.

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Thanks Gold Knight for the amazing sig!